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    concept - few lyrics feedback plz

    Post by MC CONCEPT on Sun Dec 30, 2007 4:42 pm

    few of me lyrics just wana see what people think of them....imo a reckin my rhymes sound better than look..

    competition creeping, theyre tryin to pass me,
    but av got no doubts in thoughts coz i am an mc,
    people judgin concept and other mcs too,
    really think that i give a shit you must be sniffing glue,
    coz there is,
    no contest al beat the best,
    and yes and you've guessed its mc concept,
    strights, its time to rock,
    and now every time a can not stop,
    youve been rocked off oh so tragic,
    your concept worked his magic,
    end of session i have won,
    but the battles just begun.

    back in the year 2005 where concept and envy started,
    back to back it was a combination only for strong hearted,
    not a clue how they did it some may call it luck,
    the envy hit them with his rhymes you have now been struck,
    the concept hit ya with his style and blow your mind to bits,
    as i say my rhymes there is a rush i will transmitt,
    we want to see you ravers jump, as we now combine,
    style and lyrics put together as our design.

    i get, swift am a lyrical gift,
    concept make your kidneys shift,
    recon thats what we do,
    information party crew,
    spread just illness yes you heard the concepts name,
    left right up and down and centre and round once again.

    concept of core conditions,
    tell you all about my main ambition,
    on my way to get my glory,
    tell you quick coz its a long storey,
    started many years ago inside the slizzos session,
    your mc concept rocked not stop maintaining my obsession.

    FEEDBACK PLZ lol!
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    Re: concept - few lyrics feedback plz

    Post by mc lsd on Mon Dec 31, 2007 3:44 pm

    haha got some bangi bits in there like mate (y) keep up the good work
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    Re: concept - few lyrics feedback plz

    Post by Mc Mental on Mon Dec 31, 2007 5:04 pm

    yav got sum canny lethal rhymes there lyk Twisted Evil keep it up
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    Re: concept - few lyrics feedback plz

    Post by MC-R.A.P.I.D on Mon Dec 31, 2007 11:30 pm

    back in the year 2005 where concept and envy started,
    back to back it was a combination only for strong hearted,
    not a clue how they did it some may call it luck,
    the envy hit them with his rhymes you have now been struck,
    the concept hit ya with his style and blow your mind to bits,
    as i say my rhymes there is a rush i will transmitt,
    we want to see you ravers jump, as we now combine,
    style and lyrics put together as our design.

    thats my fav like nice flow and use of technicallity btw

    check the estimated line up
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    Re: concept - few lyrics feedback plz

    Post by MCBOUNCIN on Tue Jan 01, 2008 9:18 am

    OK COULD SIMPLIFY IT A BIT I RECKON NEE OFFENCE 2 MANY WORDS ON 1 LINE CANT GET A NICE RYTHYM READING IT ANYWAYS MITE SOUND AREET WHEN HE DOES IT IN HIS STYLE!!
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    Re: concept - few lyrics feedback plz

    Post by MC CONCEPT on Tue Jan 01, 2008 10:46 am

    rr when a say that rhyme on my audio btw a do it wrong haha that was when a first made it....youll hear it proply on me new audio coming soon Smile
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    Re: concept - few lyrics feedback plz

    Post by MCBOUNCIN on Tue Jan 01, 2008 12:14 pm

    NEE BOVA WASNT HAVIN A GAN AT YOU JUST CONSRUCTIVE CRITICISM Cool
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    Re: concept - few lyrics feedback plz

    Post by MC CONCEPT on Tue Jan 01, 2008 12:27 pm

    aye cheers m8 appretiate it...here am gana be sick in min off the drink me
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    Re: concept - few lyrics feedback plz

    Post by MC CONCEPT on Thu Jan 03, 2008 12:23 pm

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